Kenny's personality wasn't the same, either. He grew distant, more agitated. Cheryl thought it was stress, that the pressure of work was getting to him. But as the months went by, his condition got worse. He was put on medication for depression. Although it helped, Cheryl said, "He just wasn't Kenny."His children also noticed the change. During a family trip to France, he hardly spoke. His son, Graham, knew this wasn't his dad. "He'd tell stupid jokes all the time," said Graham. "And on this trip, he wasn't telling jokes. He was sitting there with a blank stare on his face."
There is no know cure for this illness. all the family can do is just watch as there father slowly slips away from them.
That's a scary condition, Edward. And a sad situation for Kenny and his family.
ReplyDeleteHere are some comments on your post:
1. Your source article should be identified and linked to in the body of your post, not the label. The label should simply be "current event".
2. You say there is no cure for the illness, yet you never tell us what the illness actually is besides describing the symptoms. Perhaps your explanation could have covered this?
3. When a person (Cheryl in this case) is identified in your quote, you should probably let your readers know who that person is and why they are relevant to the post.
If you make those few minor adjustments, this is a pretty good first post. 16/25